HI
This is my first story so be nice:

to be continued

Well I really enjoyed reading this story and I want to know when it is going to be continued!!!

Hint! Hint!-don't make us wait too long-will you!!!

Love your dolls and I am so impressed that you can put speech bubbles into your photos..... .......I can't do that

loved the story, cant wait for the next part

thank you both of you for your great comments, the longest it will take for me to put the rest up is a week but I should have it up before then

Oh I enjoyed that, looking forward to the next part Lynette

Come On Part 2
Will sit here until part 2 shows up!!

I thought the poor girl was doomed, what happens next, great so far.

OMG poor Zeffie!!! Will she be OK? I hope the vampire doesn't start having breakfast at her expense!!

Great story Emma, can't wait for the next installment

I, too, hope that Zeffie stays safe!

Great job on the story, Emma! Isn't it fun to do? Looking forward to the next installment....


Mary

Wonderful story so far Emma...
Hope Zeffie is going to be ok
Looking forward to the next part...

Hugs,
Keirra

Great story so far Emma.
I can't wait to see the rest of it.

Hugs
Mum

wow thank you so much
Thankies for your amazing and lovely comments
Me so happy
I better get started on the next part

Great story Emma you did really well for your first photo story ^^ I love seeing your girls in action I can't wait to see more from them.
I've been meaning to start using text on my pics instead of typing but alas I never do ^^;
It looks great well done ^^